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Wednesday, February 19, 2020

RITCHIE’S WAR: REVIEW


While Ritchie’s War does stand alone as a novel and touches on various aspects of the three previous volumes, readers might get a better understanding of the complexities of the situation if they read the other three novels in sequence before tackling this one. (Review by Barry Meehan)

Author Neville Herrington is a former lecturer at the University of KZN. He is also a director of the award-winning Durban-based Tekwini Production company, which specialises in documentaries.

Ritchie’s War relates the story of Ritchie Gray, who volunteers at the tender age of 19 for active service in the First World War, and barely survives the East African campaign, which is fought out in near-impossible conditions, with more soldiers dying of malaria, dysentery and black fever than are killed in battle. Decent rations are barely enough to keep a man alive, owing to supply chain problems, and added encounters with warring local tribes, cannibals and a canny German commander, whose force consists mainly of black askaris, add to the confusion of a war being fought a continent away from the main battlefield arena of Europe. Any romantic notions of soldiering and heroism rapidly dissipate, and Ritchie rapidly comes face-to-face with the futility of war.

An heroic act sees him close to death in a military hospital, where he has an “out-of-body” experience that brings back vivid memories of his childhood and sets him on a remarkable and life-threatening journey back in civilian life, determined to investigate the circumstances surrounding the execution of his mother, which draws him into a world of black prostitutes, demonic possession and exorcism.

In his preface to Ritchie’s War, Herrington states that what started out as a trilogy covering the life of Ritchie’s mother, Brigid O’Meara (England Wants Your Gold, which covers the Jameson Raid and the consequent Anglo-Boer War, The Irish Boer Woman, which details the horrors of the British concentration camps, and The Dark Night of the Soul, in which she is drawn in to the demonic world which destroys her) became a quartet with the continuing story of Ritchie. While Ritchie’s War does stand alone as a novel and touches on various aspects of the three previous volumes, readers might get a better understanding of the complexities of the situation if they read the other three novels in sequence before tackling this one.

History buffs, especially those interested in the First World War and the East African campaign, which was fought by the colonies rather than the main protagonists, will get a good insight into the campaign, as all the battles featured in Ritchie’s War are based on well-documented, actual conflict skirmishes and situations. Those who have followed the story of Brigid O’Meara in the first three books in the series will be able to sink their teeth into this story of her son. And dare I say it – it would appear from the ending of Ritchie’s War that the stage has been set for a fifth novel in the series, although it would of necessity be on a very different path to the others.

There are a few typos, grammatical errors and mis-spellings in Ritchie’s War which have slipped past the editor, as with many self-published works, and I must say I found Herrington’s writing in the present tense, as opposed to the accepted norm, somewhat off-putting and stilted on occasion.

“Ritchie, Kosie, David and Billy are members of a patrol sent on a reconnaissance and led by a tough sergeant from Barberton, 24-year-old Johnny Bates, who immediately maps out the aim.
‘Remember, fellows, are (sic) mission is not to get into a fight, but to remain undetected. Stealth is the keyword.’”

These quibbles aside, any local author who is prepared to self-publish deserves the support of the reading public.

Ritchie’s War costs R150 (price excludes postage) and can be ordered from Exclusive Books or Tekwini website at www.tekweni.co.za or email: tekweni@iafrica.com ISBN: 978-0-9946692-5-4 – Barry Meehan